Jupiter Carnage 3 -- yet another techbase for vanilla Doom 1

Played this on UV. The music needs to be evened out volume-wise, but I love the track chosen because I really love Rise of the Triad. The Medikit behind that green switch barrier needs to be moved forward because it is too hard to get currently. Ammo gets a bit tight at times. In addition to being very plain and bland, the design is really mazey and kinda devolves into a corridor-shooter for much of the wad, which tends to be boring. Also, you might consider learning to inset your doors, which not only looks better but would allow you to use more ceiling height variation. The gameplay also suffers because the player is forced to kill mid-tier and high-tier enemies with weak weapons, which gets old quick. I gave up shortly after the nukage part, where you make the player run through nukage without a rad suit and only offer him an invulnerability sphere and a berserk pack. I noticed that the wad has 615 monsters!

My advice would be to make a smaller map but spend your time making each area better, instead of a giant map that is bland and ho-hum throughout. Perhaps do a map with 50 monsters tops. Make the map in the spirit of E1M1. Make the areas interconnect in interesting ways. Create lots of height variation, both in ceilings and floors, and perhaps allow the player to re-visit areas he's already been to from a different height by using platforms or pillars that act as a bridge. Make the fights interesting and fun by surrounding and surprising the player rather than having everything file in towards him in a straight line so he can just use chokepoints to negate any challenge. Just my two cents.